Darkness
Two worlds
Bright and beautiful
Dark and sullen
Intertwined
He savored her being
For she was his light
On his dark, blank abyss
She scattered her flaming stars

via Daily Prompt: Savor
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Well expressed!
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Thank you!
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I love the daily prompts. I wrote a love story as well :D. Excellent post!
-Luna 🙂
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Thank you so much. Those are so fun to do.
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Good read 🙂 I do like the background image you’ve used 🙂
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Thank you! Sometimes the images are hard to come across. It takes me longer to find those than write sometimes haha.
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Powerfully written and you included bold images to really feel the words you have used. Great work !
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Powerfully written! I also enjoyed the imagery that you selected to feel the words within the poem. Great work! 👌🏽
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I really love the light and darkness duality. Beautifully written!
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Thank you so much!
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Aw, so cute! Really enjoyed this one. I like that it, in my eyes, can have so many different meanings. The literal one about people, but it also reminds me of space and the stars!
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Thank you! When I’m writing, especially poems I like to keep them open ended. Just so whoever is reading can feel my emotions but put their own ideas and situations into it too. So I’m glad it’s coming across that way. 😀
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This brought back so many memories of when I was really into poetry! Makes me want to start up again. I love that you have allowed it to have so many different meanings. Great read, keep it up!
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Thank you! I appreciate it. I have a hard time sharing poetry with people so I just jumped in and decided to share whatever I wrote. It’s been freeing in a way.
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That’s an awesome way to start! Exactly why I’m blogging.
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Love it!
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Thank you very much 😀
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You are welcome!
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